Jessie
Posts : 98 Join date : 2011-10-12 Location : Down In the South, cuz I'm Country!
Wolf Info Mate: Looking... Wolf Age: nearly 2 yrs
| Subject: Twoleg Place-Appalosa Ravine Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:20 pm | |
| A small human(Twoleg)town, which every wolf dreads of going to. There are houses and cars everywhere. | |
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Jessie
Posts : 98 Join date : 2011-10-12 Location : Down In the South, cuz I'm Country!
Wolf Info Mate: Looking... Wolf Age: nearly 2 yrs
| Subject: Re: Twoleg Place-Appalosa Ravine Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:11 pm | |
| The truck pulls into a small Twoleg cottage and the Twolegs get out, and yank the crate incasing Jessie down and drag it into the house. She is pulled out of the cage, and a female Twoleg pets her until she is awake once more. Jessie realizes where she is in horror. She jumps up and barks, tail between her legs. The female Twoleg bends down and talks soothingly, but a large male yells at her and Jessie. The male bends down quickly in Jessie's face and pulls her sled harness. I knew I should've taken this lously thing off! I hope they're not as bad as Leon and Mahakee. Maybe the woman will stop him...* * * After the next few days, Jessie noticed that the female, who she learned was Hacumick(Hah-kum-eek[pronounciation]), called her Buniq, meaning 'sweet daughter'. The young hybrid showed some affection toward her, yet Mikain(Mike-an) was very cruel to them both, and worked Jessie hard , and beat Hacumick just for showing affection to the scared fae. Please, ClearMoon Pack, come save me and Hacumick. She will take care of us, and help us all.The dog silently pleaded and prayed nightly. | |
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Jewelz Admin
Posts : 908 Join date : 2010-08-06 Location : The other side of the world.
Wolf Info Mate: dude guess Wolf Age: 4
| Subject: Re: Twoleg Place-Appalosa Ravine Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:34 am | |
| Not sure why you can't just call them humans, but anyway;
For our type of RP, this is unrealistic human interaction, which is against the rules that have been set in place for the site's RP. I would highly recommend that you took a look at them again to see exactly what you did wrong.
As well, I would prefer that any topics created in this part of the forum actually fit in with the general area that was described by the others already here, so that they all seem part of the same region. A random town near the borders of our territory just doesn't fit.
Because of all this, I'll have to lock this topic, as this RP should not go on. If you would like to have a RP similar to this, you may post it in the Other RPs forum, not here.
Also, I may have to have a chat or send you a PM about your posts in Clear View sometime soon, as they were also unacceptable.
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